rainy day

As I got up this morning and I thought to myself. Today is going to be the best. Me and my family were going to Ceder Point. I got out of bed and took a shower. I put on a blue dress. My mom brushed my hair and I looked out the window and saw that it was raining. Why did it have to rain this saturday. I went down stairs to see it was actually raining. Yup, it was raining. I was so cross that morning. My dad tried to cheer me up by saying we would go tomorrow and I had an amazing time at ceder point.


  1. Aalaa, I understand both the child's and the parents' perspective in your piece. A change in plans CAN be so disappointing. Isn't it just the worst when the weather---which we have no control over-gets in the way of our plans? I am glad the parents helped the narrator keep a good attitude and the next day turned out fine.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA


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